
SOARING MIGRATION Give heed to the wind Soaring despite the dark clouds Turbulence lurking. Destination known Miles travelled thru migration Landing in moments. Stay safe in numbers Precious life carefully soar Rest must come once more. by: Lisa Coleman Sue VincentΒ is the host of Thursday Photo Prompt. "Soar"

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15 responses to “#Write Photo – Haiku – Soar”
Lisa, have you considered adding a generous measure of collective nouns to your exquisite ensemble of bird photos? Sort of like spicing things up a bit. Something to ponder should you have the notion, maybe. Much can be found on the subject in James Lipton’s “An Exaltation of Larks,” as you’ll see at the following web link. Should you decide to pursue it, hope you have fun. π
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This wasnβt my photo. Itβs a writing challenge and the photo is provided by Sue Vincent along with a topic. I wrote the poem based on that criteria. π
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Lovely verse, Lisa π
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Thank you so much! π
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Beautiful poem, Lisa. The brevity of haiku adds impact.
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Thank you Sue. It was a great debate on what to do.
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Nice words!
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Thank you so much. π
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Another perfect coupling of words and a photo – well done, Lisa!
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Why thank you very much Jim! π
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Beautiful.
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Thanks Leslie! π
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Lovely!!
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Thank you so very much! π
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